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Open, Shut Them, Open, Shut Up

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madelyn
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0 posted 06-06-2012 04:32 AM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for madelyn


open your eyes
and look at me
open your eyes
and take me in

open your heart
i wish you could see how i feel
open your heart
and look at me with that
open your heart
so look at me,
with your heart
and tell me i'm not worth it
tell me you don't love me
tell me i wasted my hope on you
tell me that you never loved me
in that way

close your eyes
i want to show you how it feels
close your eyes
and take one deep breath
close your eyes
feel me touch your shoulder, lightly
tenderly
close your eyes
and feel me rip your beating heart
out of the now empty cavity of your chest

My pen is the barrel of a gun. Remind me which side you should be on.

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voice2bheard
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since 10-19-2007
Posts 582
New York


1 posted 07-17-2012 08:41 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

wow, beautiful but hurtful both at the same time! I loved it!

Kate

LaGraceLa
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2 posted 08-20-2012 11:05 PM       View Profile for LaGraceLa   Email LaGraceLa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LaGraceLa

Wow, you're an amazing writer. This is so powerful, so packed full of emotion, it is wonderful!
 
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