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the solid double lines between us go on farther than the eye can see. the areas where the lines break up were painted over when you pushed me away to the other side and decided to start believing lies. the words that bled from your lips burned my whole being, and with every word you spoke another line was painted yellow.

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Excellent use of metaphor
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