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Interactions with a chick

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casademas94
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0 posted 02-23-2012 09:39 PM       View Profile for casademas94   Email casademas94   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for casademas94


Turned my back
Left you the cold
Came along
and trickled this sexy hold
Turned me into clay
Which you oh so love to mold
Blowing my mind
Which is perceived
as a sacred silo
But what do I know
You just touched me... so
I'm 17 I wrote this in literally 2 min in the middle of doing homework so it may seem clunky and awkward at spots but it was how i was feeling at the time.
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yea really needs alot of work

Kate_Mcfee (Lily's Mom)

 
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