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maddorani
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0 posted 10-25-2011 11:15 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for maddorani


give me some feedback ok and thanks

Kimi ga iru kara
Because you are here
Kimi ga iru kara
Because you are here.-
I feel jubilant
It feels like I have a purpose
I feel special
Just because I have you
But somehow yet my heart
Feels empty.-
Even though you are here
I canít see you
Even though you are here
I barely talk to you
Even though you are here
I still feel alone
Even though you are here
I canít reach out to you
Even though you are here
I still want to be with you.-
But how!?
When I havenít seen you
When all you are is a memory to me!?
But yet I still feel your presence.
Your presence is what makes me feel
Happy
And makes me want to go on
I donít know what I would do without you.-
Aitai
I want to see you
Aitai
I want to see you.-
Even though you are here
Even though I canít see you
But yet the desire of wanting
To see you
Is getting piled up
Inside my heart
Just like the flood
My tears are about to
Overflow because the pain
Is starting to grow inside my
Heart.-
Iím crying
Iím crying
I want you
I miss you
Iím vexed
Iím distressed
It hurts
Its painful
I hate this feeling!
I donít want this feeling!
But yet it makes exultant-
Kimi ga iru kara
Because you are here
Kimi ga iru kara
Because you are here
Always by my side
Supporting me in the
Shadows
Even though you are here
But very far away
I look up at the sky
Feeling the wind
Wrapping around my
Body
Sending me a sign that
You are here


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mona88
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1 posted 11-24-2011 09:57 PM       View Profile for mona88   Email mona88   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for mona88

Really great poem. You've got the talent!
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translate English to Chinese
maddorani
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houston,tx


2 posted 11-24-2011 11:27 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

thanks if u wantt to see more u should go to dark poetry
voice2bheard
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since 10-19-2007
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3 posted 03-11-2012 01:09 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Not bad at all!! appreciated!!!

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maddorani
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4 posted 03-11-2012 03:12 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

thanks
priyanka
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5 posted 06-08-2012 02:49 AM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

gud 1!!
maddorani
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6 posted 06-08-2012 03:24 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

u should check out some in dark poetry
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