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maddorani
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since 11-18-2007
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houston,tx


0 posted 10-06-2011 04:25 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for maddorani


I finally got the freedom
That I always wanted-
I am no longer a bird
Locked up in a cage.
I am no longer an animal
Locked up in a zoo.
I am a human being
That is walking
Under the clear blue
Sky and the clouds
Just getting swayed
By the wind.-
I am walking and
Walking around my
Neighborhood
Looking at all
These little kids
Playing, jumping,
Smiling, and running
Which makes my heart
Feel at serenity and tranquility-
I take a deep breath
Enjoying every moment
Enjoying every bit of this weather
Enjoying the beautiful scenery
Just looking and wondering around
And asking myself
Why didnít I enjoy everything full heartedly?
Why didnít I do this long time ago?
What was holding me back?-
I became more carefree
I became free
I can fly like a bird
Carelessly
Recklessly
Because I will
Still have bumpy roads
Along the way and
Get through every one
Of them-
I am jubilant
I am exultant
I got the freedom
That I always wanted
And I will never let it
Go
I am clasping it with my hands-
Freedom is
Written and hidden inside of
My palms
As if it was written for my
Destiny
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priyanka
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since 06-15-2009
Posts 212
india


1 posted 10-09-2011 10:53 AM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

Glad you found that freedom!

I especially loved this part!!!
I am clasping it with my hands-
Freedom is
Written and hidden inside of
My palms
As if it was written for my
Destiny

wow! way to freedom!
maddorani
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since 11-18-2007
Posts 419
houston,tx


2 posted 10-09-2011 01:11 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

lol but i am working on it looking and trying to soar the sky
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