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maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx

0 posted 2011-10-06 04:25 PM



I finally got the freedom
That I always wanted-
I am no longer a bird
Locked up in a cage.
I am no longer an animal
Locked up in a zoo.
I am a human being
That is walking
Under the clear blue
Sky and the clouds
Just getting swayed
By the wind.-
I am walking and
Walking around my
Neighborhood
Looking at all
These little kids
Playing, jumping,
Smiling, and running
Which makes my heart
Feel at serenity and tranquility-
I take a deep breath
Enjoying every moment
Enjoying every bit of this weather
Enjoying the beautiful scenery
Just looking and wondering around
And asking myself
Why didn’t I enjoy everything full heartedly?
Why didn’t I do this long time ago?
What was holding me back?-
I became more carefree
I became free
I can fly like a bird
Carelessly
Recklessly
Because I will
Still have bumpy roads
Along the way and
Get through every one
Of them-
I am jubilant
I am exultant
I got the freedom
That I always wanted
And I will never let it
Go
I am clasping it with my hands-
Freedom is
Written and hidden inside of
My palms
As if it was written for my
Destiny

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priyanka
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since 2009-06-15
Posts 216
india
1 posted 2011-10-09 10:53 AM


Glad you found that freedom!

I especially loved this part!!!
I am clasping it with my hands-
Freedom is
Written and hidden inside of
My palms
As if it was written for my
Destiny

wow! way to freedom!

maddorani
Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
2 posted 2011-10-09 01:11 PM


lol but i am working on it looking and trying to soar the sky
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