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karren29
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since 09-29-2011
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philippines


0 posted 10-06-2011 02:45 AM       View Profile for karren29   Email karren29   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for karren29


dear love,look at me
can u see, this pain's driving me crazy
people say u make the world go round
but i say today u let me down..

dear love, u said there's nothing u can't do
for as long as i am true
now look at me
do u see the girl i used to be?

tell me what u find
if u can read my mind
look in my eyes
do u see a million lies?

dear love, u said i could give him my heart
u promised we'll never be apart
i ignored what's in my head
i did everything he said

now i lay in the green grass
i cry as i watch the birds pass
i see the butterflies fly away
i watch the sky as it turns gray

dear love, i hope u know
how i feel so low
i hope u can see
what u did to me........

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

© Copyright 2011 karren vianca crisostomo - All Rights Reserved
priyanka
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since 06-15-2009
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india


1 posted 10-09-2011 11:03 AM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

I like the idea behind the poem, writing to love! That is really good. But dear Karren, there are good days and there are bad days, the beauty lies in the fact that you can edit your memories to remember the best days
 
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