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karren29
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since 09-29-2011
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philippines


0 posted 10-06-2011 02:41 AM       View Profile for karren29   Email karren29   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for karren29


It's been 5 days since you left my heart broken,
I thought I couldnít bear it but I had my head shaken.
Yes it still hurts but now I know better
That we were never really meant to be together

I've built my world around you
I thought what we had was true
I shared all my dreams with you
I even imagined you shared yours too.

I will count 5 more days, 5 more weeks, 5 more months, or even 5 more years
It will take that long before I can dry all these tears
I will have sleepless nights; I will forever have this fright
But I will continue to fight till I find the light.

People say it takes time to mend a broken heart
But Iím willing to have a brand new start.
I will believe in falling in love again,
And those heartbreaks are never the end.

I still love you, Oh God I really do
I still wish somehow you feel the same way too
I imagine you hugging me so tight
I really miss the way it felt so right.

But I know it's time to go back to reality
By moving on, Iím setting myself free
It will take some time but I will get over you
Someday, somehow I'll find another love that's true

Now all I do is silently cry and pray
That God will continue to find a way
To help me forget you and live another day
And the words "I'm happy" I can finally say.

I hope this will be the last time my heart will die
For tomorrow I'll live again and I'll try to fly
I will forever treasure those sweet moments we had
And I will forget the day you made me sad.

It's really goodbye now so I'm letting you go
But before that I want you to know
That no matter what happens I will never fear
Falling in love again and shedding another tear

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

© Copyright 2011 karren vianca crisostomo - All Rights Reserved
priyanka
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since 06-15-2009
Posts 212
india


1 posted 10-09-2011 10:58 AM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

wow! well said... I liked the way you have potrayed your feelings. Esecially like the last line! its wow!!

[This message has been edited by priyanka (10-10-2011 04:16 AM).]

 
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