navwin » Main Forums » Teen Poetry #9 » moving on
Teen Poetry #9
Post A Reply Post New Topic moving on Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
karren29
Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85
philippines

0 posted 2011-10-06 02:41 AM



It's been 5 days since you left my heart broken,
I thought I couldn’t bear it but I had my head shaken.
Yes it still hurts but now I know better
That we were never really meant to be together

I've built my world around you
I thought what we had was true
I shared all my dreams with you
I even imagined you shared yours too.

I will count 5 more days, 5 more weeks, 5 more months, or even 5 more years
It will take that long before I can dry all these tears
I will have sleepless nights; I will forever have this fright
But I will continue to fight till I find the light.

People say it takes time to mend a broken heart
But I’m willing to have a brand new start.
I will believe in falling in love again,
And those heartbreaks are never the end.

I still love you, Oh God I really do
I still wish somehow you feel the same way too
I imagine you hugging me so tight
I really miss the way it felt so right.

But I know it's time to go back to reality
By moving on, I’m setting myself free
It will take some time but I will get over you
Someday, somehow I'll find another love that's true

Now all I do is silently cry and pray
That God will continue to find a way
To help me forget you and live another day
And the words "I'm happy" I can finally say.

I hope this will be the last time my heart will die
For tomorrow I'll live again and I'll try to fly
I will forever treasure those sweet moments we had
And I will forget the day you made me sad.

It's really goodbye now so I'm letting you go
But before that I want you to know
That no matter what happens I will never fear
Falling in love again and shedding another tear

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

© Copyright 2011 karren vianca crisostomo - All Rights Reserved
priyanka
Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216
india
1 posted 2011-10-09 10:58 AM


wow! well said... I liked the way you have potrayed your feelings. Esecially like the last line! its wow!!

[This message has been edited by priyanka (10-10-2011 04:16 AM).]

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Main Forums » Teen Poetry #9 » moving on

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary