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maddorani
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0 posted 09-30-2011 04:15 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for maddorani


I have this urge to see you
This urge is becoming more
And more intense itís also
Increasing each and every time-
When I get a glimpse of you
In my room.
When I get a glimpse of you
Inside the house.
When I get a glimpse of you
Through the translucent, lustrous
Window. Ė
When I look away for a second
Your vision, your glimpse
Is just disappearing,
Vanishing into thin air
When I canít see you no more
I look around my room
I look through the window countless
Times
I run around the house
I run outside
Anxiously, panicking
Just to get a glimpse of you
Again-
While all these questions are
In my head
Where are you?
Where did you go?
Why arenít you here
Will I get to see you again?-
Everyday every time
This urge is becoming painful
As if my heart is going to explode.
As if my heart is clenched.-
I drop down to my knees
And bend over
I start crying
Because you are not
Here
Because I canít
See you no
More
Because
I want you here
I want you to be by my side
I want you to hold me tight
I want you to hold me in your arms.-
Canít you see how this urge is
Becoming beyond uncontrollable?
Canít you see how itís slowly
Killing me inside?-
Each and everyday
This urge to see you
Is tormenting me.

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priyanka
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1 posted 10-03-2011 08:02 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

Such strong desire I see... The poem is just how its meant to be
liked this part especially:
I want you here
I want you to be by my side
I want you to hold me tight
I want you to hold me in your arms
awesome!
maddorani
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houston,tx


2 posted 10-03-2011 08:11 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

thank you should post more poems i liked your work tooo
priyanka
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3 posted 10-03-2011 09:03 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

I just posted one in prose, not a poem but just good old prose.
maddorani
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4 posted 10-03-2011 09:15 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

i will go check it out you should read some more in the dark poetry i posted alot in there
priyanka
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5 posted 10-03-2011 09:18 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

I surely will
maddorani
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6 posted 10-03-2011 09:21 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

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