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maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
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0 posted 2011-09-30 04:15 PM



I have this urge to see you
This urge is becoming more
And more intense it’s also
Increasing each and every time-
When I get a glimpse of you
In my room.
When I get a glimpse of you
Inside the house.
When I get a glimpse of you
Through the translucent, lustrous
Window. –
When I look away for a second
Your vision, your glimpse
Is just disappearing,
Vanishing into thin air
When I can’t see you no more
I look around my room
I look through the window countless
Times
I run around the house
I run outside
Anxiously, panicking
Just to get a glimpse of you
Again-
While all these questions are
In my head
Where are you?
Where did you go?
Why aren’t you here
Will I get to see you again?-
Everyday every time
This urge is becoming painful
As if my heart is going to explode.
As if my heart is clenched.-
I drop down to my knees
And bend over
I start crying
Because you are not
Here
Because I can’t
See you no
More
Because
I want you here
I want you to be by my side
I want you to hold me tight
I want you to hold me in your arms.-
Can’t you see how this urge is
Becoming beyond uncontrollable?
Can’t you see how it’s slowly
Killing me inside?-
Each and everyday
This urge to see you
Is tormenting me.


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priyanka
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since 2009-06-15
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1 posted 2011-10-03 08:02 PM


Such strong desire I see... The poem is just how its meant to be
liked this part especially:
I want you here
I want you to be by my side
I want you to hold me tight
I want you to hold me in your arms
awesome!

maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
2 posted 2011-10-03 08:11 PM


thank you should post more poems i liked your work tooo
priyanka
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india
3 posted 2011-10-03 09:03 PM


I just posted one in prose, not a poem but just good old prose.
maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
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houston,tx
4 posted 2011-10-03 09:15 PM


i will go check it out you should read some more in the dark poetry i posted alot in there
priyanka
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since 2009-06-15
Posts 216
india
5 posted 2011-10-03 09:18 PM


I surely will
maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
6 posted 2011-10-03 09:21 PM



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