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theladypoet21
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since 2011-09-13
Posts 8
Ohio, USA

0 posted 2011-09-13 07:48 PM



I care about him
Not the skin he's in
I know that's the only
Thing you will see
When you see me and him
But I am asking you
To look deeper within
And you soon shall see
The great guy he truly is
If I didn't care about him
I wouldn't be begging
For your approval
I wouldn't be taking this risk
So please, please, please
Take a hing
And realize that he really
Is the best guy yet
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priyanka
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since 2009-06-15
Posts 216
india
1 posted 2011-10-03 08:17 PM


well written!!
lovely!

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