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Octave
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Highlands, Scotland.


0 posted 06-16-2011 03:42 PM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Octave

It's been a while. This is the first poem I've written in months so excuse its immaturity and lack of refinement. C&C very much welcome.

Frankenstein

Somethingís happened to me
Or worse, happening
Itís dark and wet and twisted
Itís a salty, spiteful thing

Itís unfurling from within me
With a startling, knowing grace
Iím caged between its talons
And shadow ridden face

It blossoms in my words
In sickening, silver beads
And glitters in my thoughts
And my subtle, scaling deeds

It breeds fear and paranoia
And spreads like a disease
Its boils lurch inside me
It ignores my feeble pleas

Itís choking and inhaling
And destroying every piece
Of every sliver of my being
In one easy, greedy feat

Itís whole and huge and echoing
And self righteous on its throne
Inside my head and on my skin
Itís a creation of my own.
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teamfinnick
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1 posted 08-15-2011 02:27 AM       View Profile for teamfinnick   Email teamfinnick   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for teamfinnick

Woah. I love it. Its so amazing and just like my favorite song. I like this one a lot!
rachel_anubis
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2 posted 08-23-2011 05:01 AM       View Profile for rachel_anubis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rachel_anubis

This poem was amazing. Enough said.
Octave
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3 posted 08-28-2011 07:16 AM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Octave

Wow, thank you so much.
madelyn
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Purgatory


4 posted 09-04-2011 08:51 PM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for madelyn

Loved it. Great rhythm.

Hope to read more of this standard.


M

Sadness, like happiness, has its own majestic beauty and must be embraced as a valid emotion, not pushed down as an abnormality.

Haf_Alive
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since 09-04-2011
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High in the Sky


5 posted 09-04-2011 09:59 PM       View Profile for Haf_Alive   Email Haf_Alive   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Haf_Alive

that was actually amazing.  summed it up and brought it all out with the last line, right in our faces.  skills.  thanks

HAF
Octave
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6 posted 09-07-2011 10:42 AM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Octave

Wow, thank you very much!
priyanka
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india


7 posted 10-03-2011 08:49 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

Just awesome! Well said!
 
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