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Bella5
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0 posted 06-14-2011 05:19 AM       View Profile for Bella5   Email Bella5   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bella5

i held your hand tight
i vowed not to let go

we are in this together
are you still here?

we are walking down the road
but your loosing your way

im trying to find you
but your drifting away

i hope you find your way back
becuase i need you

cause in the end
arent we going to jump?

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1 posted 06-14-2011 11:14 PM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for madelyn

I liked this poem but I think the title could've been better. "Lovers Leap" maybe?

Anyway,
good poem
M

Sadness, like happiness, has its own majestic beauty and must be embraced as a valid emotion, not pushed down as an abnormality.

 
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