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Teen Poetry #9
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Bella5
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since 2011-06-01
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0 posted 2011-06-14 05:19 AM


i held your hand tight
i vowed not to let go

we are in this together
are you still here?

we are walking down the road
but your loosing your way

im trying to find you
but your drifting away

i hope you find your way back
becuase i need you

cause in the end
arent we going to jump?


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madelyn
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since 2009-09-03
Posts 172
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1 posted 2011-06-14 11:14 PM


I liked this poem but I think the title could've been better. "Lovers Leap" maybe?

Anyway,
good poem
M

Sadness, like happiness, has its own majestic beauty and must be embraced as a valid emotion, not pushed down as an abnormality.

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