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Bella5
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0 posted 06-14-2011 05:15 AM       View Profile for Bella5   Email Bella5   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bella5

i wouldnt go looking for a gun
but if i was given one
i'd pull the trigger

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I really like this but maybe you could expand?

Also Dark poetry would be more suitable for this poem.




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Sadness, like happiness, has its own majestic beauty and must be embraced as a valid emotion, not pushed down as an abnormality.
 
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