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you've burned me.

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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 04-05-2011 06:39 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

it's a strange feeling, seeing your heart ripped from your chest and shredded; like it's an everyday occurance.

i never thought it would come to this, where the years of honesty all of a sudden don't mean anything. because an opinion got in the way. because a disregard for respect got between us. because apparently it's okay to throw away our years; erase our history and just continue with life, because it never happened.

i didn't know i wasn't allowed to believe in life after death. or that Christ is my best friend. because if you would've warned me before hand of your opposing opinions, and how harshly you think of mine, i would've never continued with this.

i can't be around someone who doesn't accept my beliefs, after all...i've put up with yours for all these years. but now it's over. nothing can change what's been said or done.

it's clear you can't accept me anymore.

julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

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HolsJoscelyne
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1 posted 04-06-2011 01:13 PM       View Profile for HolsJoscelyne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HolsJoscelyne

that's amazing!

And not just as a poem of unacceptance.
I'd love to hear the real story that inspired the poem!

Beautiful I mean I can totally connect with the first lines x

Holly Joscelyne poetry at dougthedreadpoetry.blogspot.com

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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2 posted 04-06-2011 05:30 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

thank you very much
it's interesting what creativity occurs when frustration surfaces.

julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

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