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sXemosher
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0 posted 03-31-2011 09:58 PM       View Profile for sXemosher   Email sXemosher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sXemosher

I wrote this today while waiting for my band to come over, It's not really finished and I need to make some corrections but here is the rough draft

I sit here reminiscing of the past day,
the time spent with was heartwarming,
that day was perfect in every little way,
the arrogance in the park that we mocked,
the smokers who cough,
we sat on the swings gliding back and forth,
ignoring all around us, something I never do,
I was enticed in your smile and your laugh,
what had felt like 20 minutes, 4 hours had passed,
we talked of nothing but everything all at once,
we never noticed when the arrogance left the park,
nor the smoker who passed as he slipped from our sight.

Hours passed as we joked and laughed, I was lost in your eyes,
but now I face a difficult choice,
Do you feel as I do? Is what I feel there really there?
Do I risk letting my heart out from behind its roadblock for a chance at internal bliss?


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HolsJoscelyne
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1 posted 04-05-2011 03:18 PM       View Profile for HolsJoscelyne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HolsJoscelyne

Aww,
you nearly made me cry!

Like most of these poems it reminds me of my last boyfriend so
but still how beautiful and if it's true then best of luck to you!!

Beautiful writing you really capture a moment in your writing and with such simple use of words creating imagery best of luck! xx

Holly Joscelyne poetry at dougthedreadpoetry.blogspot.com

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Listening to every heart


2 posted 04-05-2011 06:26 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Mosher...

Welcome to Passions! We hope you will
find yourself at home, and continue
to write on!

Please, check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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