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Regretful Lost
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Regretful Lost |
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frencesmae New Member
since 2011-01-07
Posts 9philippines |
-- this one's for my first love. it's funny to think that he would come back to me. 'cause it seems very impossible now. he already love somebody now :'( maybe it was when i bid goodbye and left you with the toughest question why that made your love for me fade 'cause it cuts like the sharpest blade. you dont wanna recall i wonder if you still remember me at all. i'm sorry for not seeing your worth but believe me in my mind, memories of you still go back and forth. forgive me for causing you great pain it's my fault and i understand if on your door there's already a chain. i still remember the day i asked for a second chance but you never gave me, you said you're afraid and only giving chances once. that day i felt like i was drowned in my own tears and to love me again, all you feel is fears. if only i could turn back time how i wish i could go back to those moments when you were mine. but it can't be, it seems impossible all i could ever do is to be miserable. letting you go was the dumbest thing i ever did inside my aching heart, the wounds are still unhealed it's been so long but each time i think of you i just bleed i know you're not the last guy on earth but it's just you i wanna be with. now even though you already love somebody i would still wait for you 'cause i love thee if you only knew how i wish to be with you again i always pray at night then say amen. but love is just like that they say you can't force someone if they don't wanna stay if you really love them; set them free and in our case seems like on me, you've given up already. so as this poem begins to end i want you to know that when you were mine i was like yhe luckiest girl on land and now i will try my hardest to put you out of this lymbic system to be realistic, and wake up from this dream doin this will surely be the best for most and i just wanna say that emancipating you was my most regretful lost. |
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HolsJoscelyne Junior Member
since 2011-04-05
Posts 23Colchester, United Kingdom |
AMAZING! Particularly the line: 'I know you're not the last guy on earth but it's you I want to be with' That is so beautiful and true and something I've thought and wanted to say but never said. I would ask you please, to check out my poems, Meet you and Do you miss me love? Purely because they share a similar theme to yours. I'd love to see more of your work, thank you! Holly Joscelyne poetry at dougthedreadpoetry.blogspot.com |
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frencesmae New Member
since 2011-01-07
Posts 9philippines |
thank you ! thank you !  )i'm so glad you like it and it's nice to know that im not the only one who's feeling this way. lol. thanks again. i'll read your poems too . =))) |
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