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rachel_anubis
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0 posted 03-28-2011 03:41 AM       View Profile for rachel_anubis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rachel_anubis

Where are you when I need you?
Where are you when I need someone to cry on?
Where are you when I need someone to understand?
Where were you when my heart shattered?
Where were you when the emptiness returned?
Was it really you who taught me to love?
Was it really you who taught me to cry?
Was it really you who said I could always count on you?
Where were you when I finally fell, cracked open like an egg?
Why did you ever teach me?
What did you see in me?
I am nothing.
I am nobody.
I am dead.

© Copyright 2011 Rachel Broe - All Rights Reserved
HolsJoscelyne
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1 posted 04-05-2011 03:00 PM       View Profile for HolsJoscelyne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HolsJoscelyne

Interesting

Very emotive,but what was the message you were trying to put across.
Of course the reader is engaged because we are able to perhaps think about the questions asked but what are the reasonings behind it.

And the ending, I suppose is superb.. if a little worrying!

Holly Joscelyne poetry at dougthedreadpoetry.blogspot.com

madelyn
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2 posted 09-08-2011 01:47 AM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for madelyn

Loved it

M

My pen is the barrel of a gun. Remind me which side you should be on.

LilMissHickey
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3 posted 09-09-2011 11:09 PM       View Profile for LilMissHickey   Email LilMissHickey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LilMissHickey

This is exactly how ive been ffeeling the last couple days. Hope you find some answers.

LilMissHickey<3

 
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