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maddorani
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since 11-18-2007
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houston,tx


0 posted 03-25-2011 03:45 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for maddorani

in that gorgeous face
in that angelic smile
there is a mask
concealed
behind her
that no one knows
it seems like
that girl has
a perfect life
that's like a
fairytale
but is she
really happy
or is she
depressed
will the people
ever
find
out what's going
on wiht her
how people
treat her
how
her chest
starts to
feel
oppressive
burdened
buried
with feelings
thoughts
inside her
even though
she has
an angelic smile
a gorgeous face
trying to
hide the
real her
from everyone
and doesn't
want anyone
to know
that her life is
like a
damsel
in distress
is her life
going to
get worse
or is her
life going
to be like
a fairy
tale
with
a pure
hearted
prince
how can
she change her
life
how can
she tell anyone
what's going onwithr her
when its
really
dark
and horrible
to tell
anyone
of course
she has dreams
just like any
other girl
but she
lives in
pain and
agony
wishing
someone
to save
her
from her
own clutches
but does
she believe
in fairy tales
is she going
to wait
for her prince
what's she going
to do
or what if
she gets
tired waiting
for the prince
and live rest
of her life
like a damsel
in distress forever
what choice is
she going to
make
what choice
does she have

maddorani

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XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
Posts 1416
Rekjavik Iceland


1 posted 03-27-2011 10:51 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

This very thing has been said in other ways and I find it never grows old because not everything is as it seems and not everyone is as they appear. Wonderful.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

maddorani
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since 11-18-2007
Posts 419
houston,tx


2 posted 03-28-2011 01:29 AM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

thank you
*tori_rose*
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since 10-12-2010
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Weber City, VA


3 posted 07-12-2011 05:49 PM       View Profile for *tori_rose*   Email *tori_rose*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *tori_rose*

i love this good job

~*tori*~

maddorani
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since 11-18-2007
Posts 419
houston,tx


4 posted 07-16-2011 01:26 AM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

thank u
LilMissHickey
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since 09-09-2011
Posts 12
Usa


5 posted 09-09-2011 11:10 PM       View Profile for LilMissHickey   Email LilMissHickey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LilMissHickey

Great poem, It really speaks to the heart

LilMissHickey<3

maddorani
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since 11-18-2007
Posts 419
houston,tx


6 posted 09-10-2011 12:08 AM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

thank you also you should check out some of my poems in dark poetry
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