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My Mask

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rachel_anubis
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I have a mask,
A mask of porcelain,
A mask to cover my anger,
A mask to hide my pain,
A mask to conceal my hatred,
A mask behind which I bide,
Waiting with baited breath,
Waiting for someone to see through,
Waiting for someone to see my pain,
My anger
My hatred,
Someone to realise I am hurt,
Someone to realise I am furious,
Someone to see my love,
But my mask conceals all,
Except my eyes,
Which burn behind my mask,
My mask of plain,
White,
Porcelain
© Copyright 2011 Rachel Broe - All Rights Reserved
madelyn
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since 09-03-2009
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1 posted 03-27-2011 08:39 PM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for madelyn

Good work Rachel! I really enjoyed the poem.

Hope to read more wonderful poetry!
M


Sadness, like happiness, has its own majestic beauty and must be embraced as a valid emotion, not pushed down as an abnormality.
lumina
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since 03-21-2011
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2 posted 03-27-2011 09:36 PM       View Profile for lumina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lumina

this poem inspired me to show my feelings......that must sound strange, but true. really good job!
 
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