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You Made Me

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madelyn
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since 09-03-2009
Posts 172
Purgatory


0 posted 03-24-2011 04:36 PM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for madelyn

You made me smile
Whenever I saw you
You made me smile
Whenever you laughed
You made me smile
Whenever you were around

You made me laugh
When you told a joke
You made me laugh
When I was upset
You made me laugh
When I needed it

You made me frown
When someone teased you
You made me frown
When you started talking about it
You made me frown
When you experimented

You made me angry
When you tried drugs
You made me angry
When you started to drive
You made me angry
When I blamed myself

You made me cry
When you drove away
You made me cry
When you said goodbye
You made me cry
When I was at your funeral

You made me smile
When you were alive
You made me laugh
When you were alive
You made me frown
When you first tried it
You made me angry
When you didn’t go for help
You made me cry
When you crashed into the tree
You made me cry
At your funeral
You made me angry
With myself for letting you go
You made me frown
When I saw your parents
You made me stop laughing
You made me stop smiling
Because of your stupid mistake
With
Drugs

Sadness, like happiness, has its own majestic beauty and must be embraced as a valid emotion, not pushed down as an abnormality.

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XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
Posts 1416
Rekjavik Iceland


1 posted 03-24-2011 10:28 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Madelyn, from my heart I hope this isn't based on a true situation. And if it is, I thank you for sharing it's impact in this writing so we all may share your burden and learn its lesson through your hurt. And, well written, as always.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

rachel_anubis
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since 03-24-2011
Posts 43


2 posted 03-25-2011 02:42 AM       View Profile for rachel_anubis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rachel_anubis

Wow madelyn. That is truly wonderful. It is so haunting.
HolsJoscelyne
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since 04-05-2011
Posts 23
Colchester, United Kingdom


3 posted 04-08-2011 04:46 PM       View Profile for HolsJoscelyne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HolsJoscelyne

Wow, as the first commenter said.
I really hope this wasn't true.
But so much emotion!
Honestly Madelyn you're so truly amazing at writing!

Holly Joscelyne poetry at dougthedreadpoetry.blogspot.com

AmyLynn
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since 06-25-2011
Posts 4
South Carolina, USA


4 posted 06-25-2011 05:08 PM       View Profile for AmyLynn   Email AmyLynn   Edit/Delete Message      Click to visit AmyLynn's Home Page   View IP for AmyLynn

Oh my, I wish we could talk. email me. My sister died 4 years ago. I lend my prayers to you...
*tori_rose*
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since 10-12-2010
Posts 44
Weber City, VA


5 posted 07-06-2011 10:08 PM       View Profile for *tori_rose*   Email *tori_rose*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *tori_rose*

As two others have said i so hope this is not from something you have had to wittness. im so sorry if it was though thank you for sharing that, it is very well written. i can feel the pain that comes from within.

~*tori*~

karren29
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since 09-29-2011
Posts 85
philippines


6 posted 10-04-2011 07:35 PM       View Profile for karren29   Email karren29   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for karren29

this is really sad,, really i hope this isnt true... uve got a lot of talent.. keep writing..

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

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