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maddorani
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0 posted 03-11-2011 06:24 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for maddorani

when I opened the
jewelry box i saw
ebony and clear
images

as if they were on
the t.v. screen when
i scrutinized the
flashbacks

I remembered that
these were my astray
memories that were
left behind

when each of them
passed by I felt
nostalgic and reminisced
the past bit by bit

I was being
pulverized and
hurt by the memories
itself

when these memories
reminded me of you
i felt like locking away
these memories within my heart

that's why i took this
antique jewelry box
and locked it back again
so that I won't have to remember you
© Copyright 2011 madiha - All Rights Reserved
XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
Posts 1416
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1 posted 03-22-2011 08:56 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Awesome. Seems like poetry is a natural talent to you. Much enjoyed.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

maddorani
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2 posted 03-23-2011 06:40 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

thank you so much
XGarapanX
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3 posted 03-24-2011 03:11 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Most welcome, Poet.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

rachel_anubis
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4 posted 05-25-2011 10:07 PM       View Profile for rachel_anubis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rachel_anubis

I really liked this poem.
madelyn
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5 posted 05-25-2011 10:11 PM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for madelyn

I really liked this poem and I agree with the first commenter.

Hope to see more of this quality in the furture

M

Sadness, like happiness, has its own majestic beauty and must be embraced as a valid emotion, not pushed down as an abnormality.

maddorani
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6 posted 05-26-2011 02:51 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

thank you i posted some more in dark poetry if you would like go check it over there
priyanka
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7 posted 10-03-2011 09:08 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

I liked what you had say
especially-
and locked it back again
so that I won't have to remember you
superb!
maddorani
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8 posted 10-03-2011 09:14 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

thank you actually that was for a assignment for class for my junior yr so i had to write a poem and read it in front of the class and i loved this poem too even though i write i have a few faves
priyanka
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9 posted 10-03-2011 09:17 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

oh okay... You wrote it when you were even younger! thats just great!
maddorani
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10 posted 10-03-2011 09:23 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

yeah but i missed posting on this site it was actually my senior yr nvm i think the actual date was 3-24-10
priyanka
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11 posted 10-03-2011 09:43 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

oh, I missed it too! Thats why I'm back! lol anyway If we continue conversing her, one of them wil delete our posts! lol
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