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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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In Love <3

0 posted 2011-03-10 11:05 PM



Waiting Wanting Willing Wishing

Waiting takes up all my life
Wanting, willing, wishing
But nothing changes, and I suspect it won’t

Sweet life of sunshine carries me through
Giving breath to my suffocated soul
While the honey smell of spring enthralls me

No more frozen twilights, no more bitter morning air
It vanished with the coming of the Light
All happiness complete, but one, just one

How long will you subject me?
How long shall I ponder and wonder unknowing?
Ask me this instant; keep me as your own

Every moment we are together
Anew heartbreak, a new desire
I’m ready, let’s begin our new adventure

On the black coated walls, they wrote my doom.

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maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
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houston,tx
1 posted 2011-03-11 05:43 PM


i liked it
Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
2 posted 2011-03-18 12:25 PM


Dear Kate,

This makes me smile. Congratulations

- Earl

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
3 posted 2011-03-22 02:53 PM


Awesome!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

rachel_anubis
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since 2011-03-24
Posts 43

4 posted 2011-03-25 02:44 AM


That was really beautiful.
RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
5 posted 2011-03-28 02:50 AM


LOVE!!!!!!


Man ur such an amazing writer.. i wish i had your talent.. these days i can barely manage a whole sentence, let alone a poem..

xx

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
6 posted 2011-05-15 05:30 PM


Just a piece of irony, I wrote this the day before he proposed.

On the black coated walls, they wrote my doom.

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