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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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Waiting Wanting Willing Wishing

Waiting takes up all my life
Wanting, willing, wishing
But nothing changes, and I suspect it won’t

Sweet life of sunshine carries me through
Giving breath to my suffocated soul
While the honey smell of spring enthralls me

No more frozen twilights, no more bitter morning air
It vanished with the coming of the Light
All happiness complete, but one, just one

How long will you subject me?
How long shall I ponder and wonder unknowing?
Ask me this instant; keep me as your own

Every moment we are together
Anew heartbreak, a new desire
I’m ready, let’s begin our new adventure

On the black coated walls, they wrote my doom.

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maddorani
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1 posted 03-11-2011 05:43 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

i liked it
Earl Robertson
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2 posted 03-18-2011 12:25 PM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Robertson

Dear Kate,

This makes me smile. Congratulations

- Earl
XGarapanX
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3 posted 03-22-2011 02:53 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Awesome!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

rachel_anubis
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4 posted 03-25-2011 02:44 AM       View Profile for rachel_anubis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rachel_anubis

That was really beautiful.
RevengeIsMine
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5 posted 03-28-2011 02:50 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

LOVE!!!!!!


Man ur such an amazing writer.. i wish i had your talent.. these days i can barely manage a whole sentence, let alone a poem..

xx
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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6 posted 05-15-2011 05:30 PM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

Just a piece of irony, I wrote this the day before he proposed.

On the black coated walls, they wrote my doom.

 
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