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Vulpine
Junior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 20
Minnesota

0 posted 2011-03-08 10:03 PM


Alone i sit in this room
away from all the screams
away from all the pain
you all want to hurt me it seems

Why do you make me feel alone
cant you see i'm suffering
to watch me scream and cry
you make me feel like i'm dying

So why do you do it
cant you explain
why you put me through all this torture
and all this pain.

I am simply me and not what you want me to be.

© Copyright 2011 Emi B. Opheim - All Rights Reserved
HolsJoscelyne
Junior Member
since 2011-04-05
Posts 23
Colchester, United Kingdom
1 posted 2011-04-06 01:16 PM


Brilliant!

Short and sweet, something I've got to work on

I loved it,it's simple and just enjoyable to read.

Thank you x

Holly Joscelyne poetry at dougthedreadpoetry.blogspot.com

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