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Vulpine
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0 posted 03-08-2011 10:03 PM       View Profile for Vulpine   Email Vulpine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Vulpine

Alone i sit in this room
away from all the screams
away from all the pain
you all want to hurt me it seems

Why do you make me feel alone
cant you see i'm suffering
to watch me scream and cry
you make me feel like i'm dying

So why do you do it
cant you explain
why you put me through all this torture
and all this pain.

I am simply me and not what you want me to be.

© Copyright 2011 Emi B. Opheim - All Rights Reserved
HolsJoscelyne
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since 04-05-2011
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Colchester, United Kingdom


1 posted 04-06-2011 01:16 PM       View Profile for HolsJoscelyne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HolsJoscelyne

Brilliant!

Short and sweet, something I've got to work on

I loved it,it's simple and just enjoyable to read.

Thank you x

Holly Joscelyne poetry at dougthedreadpoetry.blogspot.com

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