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I'm Not Okay

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FloraScars
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0 posted 03-08-2011 03:39 PM       View Profile for FloraScars   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for FloraScars


I'm falling apart as days go by
Everyday lying to your face
No matter how hard I try
I can't keep up with the pace

Nothing makes sense
My thoughts are a mess
Every time you touch me I get tense
This is becoming too much stress

What use to be my life
Is now becoming my fear
Your love is becoming a knife
I'm afraid the time is near

You're asking if I'm alright
I answer, but don't look you in the eyes
I can't even sleep at night
Knowing I'm about to make you cry

I stand before you in the rain
If I say the words, I think I might dye
This is the biggest pain
I kiss your lips and murmur goodbye
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madelyn
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1 posted 03-10-2011 04:42 AM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for madelyn

This poem really made me feel.

Good poem.

M

"If I am an angel paint me with black wings"-Anne Rice

XGarapanX
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Excellent emotion tweaker for sure. Lots of continuous thoughts conveyed without becoming distracted. Beautiful.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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