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khadidja
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0 posted 02-19-2011 05:01 PM       View Profile for khadidja   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for khadidja

he can't love me

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I'm sorry I can't love you
       You're too nice
You should've fight
You shouldn't have say I'm right
You should've tell me how great you are a million
You shouldn't have be in my side
You shouldn't have believed me when I lied
You shouldn't have chatted with me
You shouldn't have opened your heart for me
You should've talk a lot
You should've get what I don’t got
You shouldnt've been you
So I could Love you
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HolsJoscelyne
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since 04-05-2011
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1 posted 04-05-2011 03:15 PM       View Profile for HolsJoscelyne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HolsJoscelyne

interesting,
I'd ask you to atleast go over this or get the grammar checked out so that we understand a 100% what you're trying to express.

But I suppose it's about what you wanted in a lover that he gave but you couldn't return?

Good start, good luck!

Holly Joscelyne poetry at dougthedreadpoetry.blogspot.com

 
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