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I'm Fine

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madelyn
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Purgatory


0 posted 02-14-2011 07:35 PM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for madelyn

My dog is dead but I'm Fine
My father's gone but I'm Fine
My best friend's turned her back but I'm Fine
My heart is cold and dead but I'm Fine
My stress is slowly killing me but I'm Fine
My shoulders hurt from all the weight but I'm Fine
My eyes are screaming for help but I'm Fine
My grades are dropping lower and lower but I'm Fine
My mind can't see right from wrong but I'm Fine
My paranoia is getting worse but I'm Fine
My body and mind is failing me but I'm Fine
I'm dying on the inside but on the outside I'm Fine
I'm never okay but I'm Fine
See I'm completly Fine.


"If I am an angel paint me with black wings"-Anne Rice

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KatVern17
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1 posted 02-17-2011 10:32 AM       View Profile for KatVern17   Email KatVern17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for KatVern17

I love this one. Its shows though everything you lost or that wasn't good you still told us you were fine even though truth be told you're not. Good work!

SarahJoyScott
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Finland


2 posted 02-17-2011 12:17 PM       View Profile for SarahJoyScott   Email SarahJoyScott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SarahJoyScott

You should have named this: "My Masquerade"
Nice poem.
HolsJoscelyne
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since 04-05-2011
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3 posted 04-05-2011 03:09 PM       View Profile for HolsJoscelyne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HolsJoscelyne

Gosh I know how you feel!

I was living that poem a couple of months ago, it sounds like you just need a hug.

So please have one over the internet!

Much love, beautiful writer! x

Holly Joscelyne poetry at dougthedreadpoetry.blogspot.com

LilMissHickey
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since 09-09-2011
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Usa


4 posted 09-09-2011 11:21 PM       View Profile for LilMissHickey   Email LilMissHickey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LilMissHickey

Thats beautiful! It sound so much like a lot of teens now a days! Thank you for sharring!
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