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Love and Sin

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Joshkt
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since 02-09-2011
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0 posted 02-10-2011 08:55 AM       View Profile for Joshkt   Email Joshkt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joshkt

Come with me into the night
Straight towards this eternal light
Travel down the road of love and sin
I'm never going to win if I keep having this
Feeling where I cant do it
Keep this burning candle of hope lit
Maybe I thought I could out wit you
when you were the one who gave me my strength
You tore me down from my pedastol
buried me in the ground and forgot
That I ever was there
Now where do I belong
Traveling down the empty road of lost dreams
The only thing keeping me here
is the feeling that maybe your near
when I know that you'll never be here

~~ Everyone Deserves a Chance ~~

© Copyright 2011 Josh Taylor - All Rights Reserved
HolsJoscelyne
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since 04-05-2011
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1 posted 04-06-2011 01:28 PM       View Profile for HolsJoscelyne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HolsJoscelyne

Wow..
That is exactly how I'm thinking at the moment.
It's lovely, though sad there's so much passion and a rawness about it.

I'd be honoured if you took a look at my work?

But wow and well done good luck with your writing!

Holly Joscelyne poetry at dougthedreadpoetry.blogspot.com

 
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