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Joshkt
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since 2011-02-09
Posts 12


0 posted 2011-02-10 08:55 AM


Come with me into the night
Straight towards this eternal light
Travel down the road of love and sin
I'm never going to win if I keep having this
Feeling where I cant do it
Keep this burning candle of hope lit
Maybe I thought I could out wit you
when you were the one who gave me my strength
You tore me down from my pedastol
buried me in the ground and forgot
That I ever was there
Now where do I belong
Traveling down the empty road of lost dreams
The only thing keeping me here
is the feeling that maybe your near
when I know that you'll never be here

~~ Everyone Deserves a Chance ~~

© Copyright 2011 Josh Taylor - All Rights Reserved
HolsJoscelyne
Junior Member
since 2011-04-05
Posts 23
Colchester, United Kingdom
1 posted 2011-04-06 01:28 PM


Wow..
That is exactly how I'm thinking at the moment.
It's lovely, though sad there's so much passion and a rawness about it.

I'd be honoured if you took a look at my work?

But wow and well done good luck with your writing!

Holly Joscelyne poetry at dougthedreadpoetry.blogspot.com

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