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Let Me Go

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Joshkt
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since 02-09-2011
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0 posted 02-09-2011 09:03 AM       View Profile for Joshkt   Email Joshkt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joshkt

Here I go again
Back to this same thing again
As we start to spin
Lose control of the vision in our head
The collision of our two worlds start
But we're falling apart
I wanna get back on my feet now
Stand up to a brand new beat
Say it, I dont need you anymore
I dont need you anymore
Im stuck in this nightmare
I cant prepare for whats gonna happen
to me next I'm so perplexed at how one
simple action can change your reaction
to how I come off to you
You control my mind you control my actions
Im gonna try and rewind but its not gonna happen
As these demons start clapping
I try to barter my soul away but I just cant give it away
these easily, its seems so easy just talking bout it
but once you get to that situation, the apparation starts
coming to your mind, you go blind in rage
fear
love
hate
Oh god let me go.

~~ Everyone Deserves a Chance ~~

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frencesmae
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since 01-07-2011
Posts 9
philippines


1 posted 03-29-2011 05:07 AM       View Profile for frencesmae   Email frencesmae   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for frencesmae

nice one. i can relate with it
HolsJoscelyne
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since 04-05-2011
Posts 23
Colchester, United Kingdom


2 posted 04-05-2011 02:52 PM       View Profile for HolsJoscelyne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HolsJoscelyne

So emotive and so powerful!

Anyone who has experienced heartache or a doomed relationship could relate to this from being the victim who ends it to the person dumped who tries to hide from what they may have caused.

I loved it, truly amazing!

Holly Joscelyne poetry at dougthedreadpoetry.blogspot.com

LaGraceLa
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since 01-30-2011
Posts 242
Minnesota, USA


3 posted 06-20-2011 10:39 PM       View Profile for LaGraceLa   Email LaGraceLa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LaGraceLa

Wow, that is like a slap in the face! Absolutist stunning. It had no apparent pattern or sence to it but it flowed beautifully all the same. The ending is what really got me, it was such a genuine cry for help and peace. I loved it, great job!
 
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