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KatVern17
Junior Member
since 2009-05-07
Posts 33


0 posted 2011-02-03 09:03 AM



When listening to music I can have more ideas "pop" then any other way
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When I'm awake
When I'm asleep
The words always follow me

In my dreams
In my thoughts
I can't escape
The words will stick with me

I think about it all the time
It's always on my mind
I hear you in my head the words that I dread

Time flys by
I see no change
Looking at you the same

Sparkle in your eyes
Never told you lies
Seeing the alter
You asked me to never wear a halter

The words always follow me
The words will stick with me
The words I dread
Forever stuck in my head

Rings on my finger
we love to linger
you knelt to the ground
I'm Glad you came around

"Will you marry me?"
He sure did ask
"Yes"
I said without a seconf tiks of a task

wake up
just a dream


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XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2011-02-03 11:33 PM


This has a touching story.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

KatVern17
Junior Member
since 2009-05-07
Posts 33

2 posted 2011-02-04 08:59 AM


Thank you. I woke up in the middle of a good dream and wrote down everything and it turned into a poem.


*tori_rose*
Junior Member
since 2010-10-12
Posts 44
Weber City, VA
3 posted 2011-02-05 10:03 PM


im lovin this and i have been there before waking up and writing stuff down lol

~*tori*~

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