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Seclusion |
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UNTAMEDelegance Member
since 2009-05-30
Posts 222Oregon |
Slowly shutting me away. I can't take the suffocation. I'm intimidated now, caught in social situations. Close, too close to see the edge. People crowding all around me. No room to breathe; can’t even see through the crowd that now surrounds me. Stepped on, trod on, pushed aside, no one spares a second glance. How can they make their way unscathed? How do they know the social dance? Ripped up, scarred, I break away. I’m finally free of their delusions. I’ll heal and grow and find myself in the calm of my seclusion. Misa: I can't imagine a world without Light! |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
This was unreal. It turned into a song as I read it and its awesome. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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serenity Junior Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 13Queensland, Australia. |
Absolutely amazing. Loved it from start to finsh. Thanks. |
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*tori_rose* Junior Member
since 2010-10-12
Posts 44Weber City, VA |
amazing!  ~*tori*~ |
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