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UNTAMEDelegance
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0 posted 01-28-2011 04:51 PM       View Profile for UNTAMEDelegance   Email UNTAMEDelegance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for UNTAMEDelegance

Slowly shutting me away.
I can't take the suffocation.
I'm intimidated now,
caught in social situations.

Close, too close to see the edge.
People crowding all around me.
No room to breathe; can’t even see
through the crowd that now surrounds me.

Stepped on, trod on, pushed aside,
no one spares a second glance.
How can they make their way unscathed?
How do they know the social dance?

Ripped up, scarred, I break away.
I’m finally free of their delusions.
I’ll heal and grow and find myself
in the calm of my seclusion.

Misa: I can't imagine a world without Light!
L: Yes, that would be dark.

© Copyright 2011 Melissa Reneé Axtell - All Rights Reserved
XGarapanX
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1 posted 01-28-2011 10:09 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

This was unreal. It turned into a song as I read it and its awesome.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

serenity
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2 posted 01-30-2011 08:27 PM       View Profile for serenity   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for serenity

Absolutely amazing. Loved it from start to finsh. Thanks.
*tori_rose*
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3 posted 02-05-2011 10:12 PM       View Profile for *tori_rose*   Email *tori_rose*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *tori_rose*

amazing!

~*tori*~

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