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I Want To Be On The Inside

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madelyn
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0 posted 01-25-2011 04:03 AM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for madelyn

I want to be on the inside
Watching everybody want to be me
I want to be on the inside
Flaunting my beauty and grace
To all those on the outside
I want to be on the inside
Smiling all through my charmed life
I want to be on the inside
Popular, pretty and brainy
I want to be on the inside
Looking out at all the
Poor
Miserable
Dumb
Girls

I want to be on the inside looking out
Not on the outside looking in

"If I am an angel paint me with black wings"-Anne Rice

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When I see excellent writing from a person I tend to expect it from most of their writing from then on. This does not disappoint. I like the way it's been written and presented. Even the black ink and the choice of font serves the purpose perfectly. It adds to the entire feel and mood of this piece. Great work.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"
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