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Three Words, Three Lies

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madelyn
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0 posted 01-24-2011 10:29 PM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for madelyn

Not my best work but it came to mind after listening to a song.
Enjoy
*****

I love you
Three solid lies

I
You weren’t who you made yourself
Out to be
You lied to me about who you were

LOVE
You told me you loved me
Forever and always
Until the day our hearts stopped beating
You lied to me
You never had a heart

YOU
Me,
A simple mistake
I never really showed you the real me
I was too afraid to get hurt…
Looks like I was right after all.

Three solid lies,
That led to my hearts demise.

"If I am an angel paint me with black wings"-Anne Rice

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Starcitta
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since 01-21-2011
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1 posted 01-24-2011 11:29 PM       View Profile for Starcitta   Email Starcitta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starcitta

...even tho u said that wasn' ur best work, i loved it, litterally i jus don' know what to say...If u ever have something to say to someone who hurt you, that would sum it up exactly...Gosh i wish he could understand things like this, anyways bravo

Amor Y Lagrimas

XGarapanX
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2 posted 01-28-2011 01:31 AM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

I fail to perceive anything lacking about this poem than from any other by your pen. I think this piece is precisely what it needs to be, so I say good work and keep them coming.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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