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Starcitta
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since 01-21-2011
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WY, USA


0 posted 01-23-2011 11:19 PM       View Profile for Starcitta   Email Starcitta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starcitta


I wrote this in summer school this year. It was one of those assignments where the teacher writes random words up on the board, and you have to interpret those words into a paragraph that describes you...Only, I took a different look on it and wrote it in verse
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July 2010


I feel annoyed probably 85% of the time
A feeling of a life that's not really mine.
Millions of ways to describe it
Depression, Anxiety,
Slipping away from reality.
Embarrassed, Lonely,
But I know that I'm not the only.
I also know that no matter what
Pep-talk I recieve,
I still won't believe
Face it.
I'm out of place in this world.

Amor Y Lagrimas

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XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
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Rekjavik Iceland


1 posted 01-28-2011 01:47 AM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Like and love it. Beautiful writing.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Starcitta
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2 posted 01-30-2011 02:32 AM       View Profile for Starcitta   Email Starcitta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starcitta

Gracias. Its one of the first i've ever put on paper ever, so i appreciate that very much

Amor Y Lagrimas

 
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