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Starcitta
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since 2011-01-21
Posts 18
WY, USA

0 posted 2011-01-23 10:47 PM



This is a poem, and prayer that i have in my heart. I wrote it for my ex...and i dedicate it to him. It was written when we were still together, and he loved it...I hope ya'll do too.

July 2010

Sittin' in this dimly lit room
Prayin for your safety,
Hoping danger won't loom.

Wishing...
To hear your soothing voice
Will you make the right choice?

Lingering...
On those dreadful words.

Anticipating...
When, and if you'll pick up the phone
Please, just please mi amor, don' leave me alone.

Wanting...
To feel your touch, kiss, caress,
Your passion couldn' be anything less

For you are mi angelito,
A love all so genuinely true
You lift me out of the blue.
I feel as if this ebony sky's stars are
Reachable
Your love taking me so high...

The evidence is all too real,
My fate is sealed...
And as your girl, a promise to swear
Myself to you is the deal.

So papi, can you feel what I feel,
See what I see?

Ultimately, will you dream wit' me?

---------------------------

Por mi corazon, mi mundo, mi hombre...
Mi angelito, eres el razon porque sigo con
Mi vida...Te quiero...

Amor Y Lagrimas

© Copyright 2011 Starasea Colon - All Rights Reserved
Starcitta
Junior Member
since 2011-01-21
Posts 18
WY, USA
1 posted 2011-01-23 10:51 PM


On the title...theres only a "'s" because i didn' want to put his name...thats the reason it looks a lil' funny

Amor Y Lagrimas

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2011-01-28 01:42 AM


Oh em gee. Oh my gumbo. Oh fo shizzle my ga-zizzle. Here is, in my opinion, one of your greater works to date (in so far as I've read your work). Great poem, and great that you are being consistent.
Starcitta
Junior Member
since 2011-01-21
Posts 18
WY, USA
3 posted 2011-01-30 02:36 AM


Lol, thank you very much...This one's my favorite, it was a very fulfilling thing for me, he meant alot. Still does

Amor Y Lagrimas

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