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Only Him For Eternity

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Starcitta
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since 01-21-2011
[First Post] 18
WY, USA


0 posted 01-21-2011 06:45 PM       View Profile for Starcitta   Email Starcitta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starcitta


It’s both physical and emotional

This yearning I feel
The pain you’ve inflicted will never heal.

To believe that we met on the Net.
Lived a long-distance love together…

And to this day,
Months after you’ve destroyed my soul,
Our conversations are friendly…

But, you continue to flaunt dirty money,
Women…And everything else a player would do.

Your there, I’m here
But can’t you hear?
The strong beating of my heart
My sobs as I release my pain
The countless un-answered prayers…

All this for you,
Someone who is blinded by thug life.
Who had the nerve to tell me that I
Could not possibly know what love is.

Oh, but I do
I feel it in the depths of my soul.
And as you destroy yourself and me,
My love for you will live for eternity.


Amor Y Lagrimas

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XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
Posts 1416
Rekjavik Iceland


1 posted 01-21-2011 08:18 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Great first post, Chica. You have got talent so I hope we see you here often.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Nareena
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since 02-17-2011
Posts 50
BC, Canada


2 posted 02-17-2011 02:27 PM       View Profile for Nareena   Email Nareena   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nareena

I've been there... I promise, it DOES get better.
Starcitta
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since 01-21-2011
Posts 18
WY, USA


3 posted 02-19-2011 01:56 PM       View Profile for Starcitta   Email Starcitta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starcitta

thats what many people have said...but its unbearable when the person you love unconditionally, could care less if you were dead or alive..Even after they had the nerve to say over and over again that they would never hurt you. It sucks to fall in love with someone who acts as if they have no heart.

Amor Y Lagrimas

khadidja
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since 12-03-2010
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4 posted 02-19-2011 05:09 PM       View Profile for khadidja   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for khadidja

I know

Love is nothing like what we hear about
but don't let it destroy ur pure feelings
love suppose to be wonderful
I know exactly the feeling when your farytale appear that is Just a teenage dreams
just a stupid remantic girl dreaming to be a princess

  But let us keep dreaming till we found it
and it'll be wonderful it'll be flawless
and we'll love it

          Keep going!!
Starcitta
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since 01-21-2011
Posts 18
WY, USA


5 posted 02-20-2011 11:35 AM       View Profile for Starcitta   Email Starcitta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starcitta

I'll keep going, altho its the hardest thing to do, but i will.. Thx

Amor Y Lagrimas

madelyn
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since 09-03-2009
Posts 172
Purgatory


6 posted 03-07-2011 05:32 AM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for madelyn

Really good poem.

I hope to see more poems of this standard.


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