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~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~
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since 01-14-2011
Posts 15
Alabama, United States


0 posted 01-20-2011 04:09 AM       View Profile for ~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~   Email ~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~


Im sorry I lied to you
And made you feel like you weren’t perfect
Im sorry I ignored you
And choose my friends to be wit
Im sorry Iforgot you
And all the wonderful things you did
Im sorry I hurt you
I promised I wouldn’t pretend

Like I didn’t love you
And everything you are
I told you so all the time
But only in the dark
When we laid side by side
Into to dreamland we’ll go
I dream of you every night
When I woke I told you so

Im sorry for everything stupid
That Ive ever done
And im really sorry
That you weren’t the only one

I keep apologizing
And saying sorry to you
But im done apologizing
For the things I didn’t do

~XxExpect Nothing N You'll Never Get HurtxX~

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XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
Posts 1435
Antarctica


1 posted 01-21-2011 10:48 AM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XGarapanX

Love it. Love the rhythm, flow, the thoughts behind it and how it stays on track down to the finish. Again, a few spelling issues which, to me, tends to distract the reader from the pure enjoyment of the piece, but over all I think this is awesome.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

maddorani
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since 11-18-2007
Posts 419
houston,tx


2 posted 03-11-2011 05:59 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

i love it how it goes i felt the emotions
Haf_Alive
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since 09-04-2011
Posts 57
High in the Sky


3 posted 09-05-2011 02:09 PM       View Profile for Haf_Alive   Email Haf_Alive   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Haf_Alive

really good job transferring your emotions to words here. makes it easy to empathize.  thanks

HAF
priyanka
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since 06-15-2009
Posts 217
india


4 posted 10-03-2011 09:10 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

But im done apologizing
For the things I didn’t do
loved this! The best!
karren29
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since 09-29-2011
Posts 85
philippines


5 posted 10-04-2011 07:29 PM       View Profile for karren29   Email karren29   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for karren29

this is a lovely poem, i felt ur emotions.. i enjoyed it very much

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

 
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