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~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~
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since 01-14-2011
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Alabama, United States


0 posted 01-20-2011 04:09 AM       View Profile for ~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~   Email ~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~


Im sorry I lied to you
And made you feel like you weren’t perfect
Im sorry I ignored you
And choose my friends to be wit
Im sorry Iforgot you
And all the wonderful things you did
Im sorry I hurt you
I promised I wouldn’t pretend

Like I didn’t love you
And everything you are
I told you so all the time
But only in the dark
When we laid side by side
Into to dreamland we’ll go
I dream of you every night
When I woke I told you so

Im sorry for everything stupid
That Ive ever done
And im really sorry
That you weren’t the only one

I keep apologizing
And saying sorry to you
But im done apologizing
For the things I didn’t do

~XxExpect Nothing N You'll Never Get HurtxX~

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XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
Posts 1416
Rekjavik Iceland


1 posted 01-21-2011 10:48 AM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Love it. Love the rhythm, flow, the thoughts behind it and how it stays on track down to the finish. Again, a few spelling issues which, to me, tends to distract the reader from the pure enjoyment of the piece, but over all I think this is awesome.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

maddorani
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since 11-18-2007
Posts 419
houston,tx


2 posted 03-11-2011 05:59 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

i love it how it goes i felt the emotions
Haf_Alive
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since 09-04-2011
Posts 57
High in the Sky


3 posted 09-05-2011 02:09 PM       View Profile for Haf_Alive   Email Haf_Alive   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Haf_Alive

really good job transferring your emotions to words here. makes it easy to empathize.  thanks

HAF
priyanka
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since 06-15-2009
Posts 212
india


4 posted 10-03-2011 09:10 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

But im done apologizing
For the things I didn’t do
loved this! The best!
karren29
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since 09-29-2011
Posts 85
philippines


5 posted 10-04-2011 07:29 PM       View Profile for karren29   Email karren29   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for karren29

this is a lovely poem, i felt ur emotions.. i enjoyed it very much

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

 
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