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I WANNA |
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~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~ Junior Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 15Alabama, United States |
I wanna scream And hopefully My head Would pop I wanna cry But when I do The tears don’t stop I wanna beat you down Then tell people I did it I wanna stop loving you This very minute I wanna slap myself Cause I knew you weren’t perfect I wanna laugh it off So my heart Would stop hurting I wanna hold you close And say all is forgiven But taking you back would be stupid So good ridden I know the game you played It’s a form of art But whoever said its Better to love and lost then to not love at all Must never have had a broken heart ~XxExpect Nothing N You'll Never Get HurtxX~ |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I believe the phrase is "good riddance" meaning it's good to be rid of you (someone), but otherly wiseness I really like this piece. Good job! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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Starcitta Junior Member
since 2011-01-21
Posts 18WY, USA |
wowwwww. I must say, im new and everythn, but i know good poetry when i see it. Jus how free you are with your words but it all fits together perfectly, and best of all..it speaks, i can feel the emotions being expressed, and that is an accomplishment. Keep it up Amor Y Lagrimas |
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