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I WANNA

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~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~
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since 01-14-2011
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Alabama, United States


0 posted 01-20-2011 04:08 AM       View Profile for ~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~   Email ~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~



I wanna scream
And hopefully
My head
Would pop
I wanna cry
But when I do
The tears don’t stop
I wanna beat you down
Then tell people
I did it
I wanna stop loving you
This very minute
I wanna slap myself
Cause I knew you weren’t perfect
I wanna laugh it off
So my heart
Would stop hurting
I wanna hold you close
And say all is forgiven
But taking you back
would be stupid
So good ridden
I know the game you played
It’s a form of art
But whoever said its
Better to love and lost then to not love at all
Must never have had a broken heart

~XxExpect Nothing N You'll Never Get HurtxX~

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XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
Posts 1416
Rekjavik Iceland


1 posted 01-21-2011 10:44 AM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

I believe the phrase is "good riddance" meaning it's good to be rid of you (someone), but otherly wiseness I really like this piece. Good job!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Starcitta
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since 01-21-2011
Posts 18
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2 posted 01-21-2011 06:35 PM       View Profile for Starcitta   Email Starcitta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starcitta

wowwwww. I must say, im new and everythn, but i know good poetry when i see it. Jus how free you are with your words but it all fits together perfectly, and best of all..it speaks, i can feel the emotions being expressed, and that is an accomplishment. Keep it up

Amor Y Lagrimas

 
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