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FarFromOrdinary
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Im done trying
so desperatley
to reach eveyones standards
im simply finished with
pleasing ......
by dissapointing myself

Never achiving what i want
to occupied trying to maintain
everyones constant approval
never tuley perfect.

because perfect oes not exist
to many oppsing opinions

And as much as i want to be what u want

Im done  loving all of you more than i love pieces of me

Im finish giving nut nevr reciving
Recongnition, appreciation , love
anything that shows that you understand that what i do, what i give, what i sacrificed, is all for you

so im done
Im simply finished
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1 posted 01-21-2011 10:33 AM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Again, the beauty in this is the honesty. I as a reader truly appreciate it.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

 
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