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distance in love

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*tori_rose*
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since 10-12-2010
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0 posted 01-08-2011 06:40 PM       View Profile for *tori_rose*   Email *tori_rose*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *tori_rose*



you look in to his eys

he smiles,
thats all it took you are now hooked

you hug and you tell yourself you arent going to get attached.

then all everytime you pull back from his hugs you realize you want more you want to feel your lips on his.

you almost have before but you stoped yourself because you know you cant be with him

so you hug and go your seprate ways.

or atleast you thought you left him,
until you realize that he is all you can think about.

you wish you could see him but distance stands in the way.

you cant help but feel you have fell for someone you could never have.

but yet u pray that one day soon he will show up and you will be back in his arms again.

~*tori*~

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XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
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Rekjavik Iceland


1 posted 01-12-2011 12:35 AM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Absolutely lovely. These simple sentiments about a difficult love are as stirring as grand and eloquent poetry.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Starcitta
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2 posted 01-22-2011 09:26 PM       View Profile for Starcitta   Email Starcitta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starcitta

this is beautiful, and real..I can see myself in that place, loving someone so far away. It's a feeling many people experience, hard isn't it? Cuz all we hav is hope, great job, hope to read more

Amor Y Lagrimas

 
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