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winter nights

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*tori_rose*
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Weber City, VA


0 posted 01-07-2011 12:37 PM       View Profile for *tori_rose*   Email *tori_rose*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *tori_rose*


the moon,
shines bright out into the night

the air,
cold and crisp

the wind,
blowing calmly through the trees

the ground,
icy yet soft from the new fallen snow


you can hear,
the animals moving through the night

you can see,
the bare trees as you walk through the moon lit forest

you can feel,
the night air upon your face

you can smell,
the wood burning from the near by homes

~*tori*~

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XGarapanX
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Rekjavik Iceland


1 posted 01-07-2011 01:43 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

I'm no poetry mechanic, just an occasionally fortunate amateur who knows wonderful writing when I see it. This is sooooooo awesome!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

*tori_rose*
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2 posted 01-07-2011 06:40 PM       View Profile for *tori_rose*   Email *tori_rose*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *tori_rose*

thank you after writing this i was so happy reading it back to myself and feeling like i was there

~*tori*~

XGarapanX
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3 posted 01-07-2011 07:07 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

I understand exactly what you mean. This evokes a most wonderful wintry feel without the icicles dangling from one's nose!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

 
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