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*tori_rose*
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since 10-12-2010
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Weber City, VA


0 posted 01-07-2011 12:31 PM       View Profile for *tori_rose*   Email *tori_rose*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *tori_rose*

this is a poem to my great grandmother who passed 2 years ago on 4th of july, she is missed dearly.
If love alone could have saved you
you never would have passed.

In life i loved you dearly;
in death i love you still.

In my heart you hold a place
no other could ever fill.

If tears could build stairways,
an heartache make a lane,
i'd walk the path to heaven
and bring you back agian.

our family chain is broken,
and nothing seems the same,
byt God calls us one by one,
the cain will link again soon enough.

~*tori*~

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XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
Posts 1416
Rekjavik Iceland


1 posted 01-07-2011 01:41 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

This is an absolutely beautiful and fitting tribute!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

*tori_rose*
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2 posted 01-07-2011 06:38 PM       View Profile for *tori_rose*   Email *tori_rose*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *tori_rose*

thank you very much for your feed back on my poems im glad you like them

~*tori*~

XGarapanX
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3 posted 01-07-2011 07:12 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

No problem at all. If I love anything about the written art, it's the simple, expressive, honest and emotive poetry that I find in here. Thank you for sharing!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

 
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