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khadidja
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since 12-03-2010
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0 posted 01-06-2011 03:36 PM       View Profile for khadidja   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for khadidja


my day became night
my wrong became right
my smile begain tear
my joy became fear
my colors are grey
don't know what to say
everything is unfair
my dreams are nightmare
darkness every where
trees are crying
betterfly are not flying
flowers are dieying
the rain keep falling

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XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
Posts 1416
Rekjavik Iceland


1 posted 01-16-2011 11:17 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

I love the sincerity of this.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~
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since 01-14-2011
Posts 15
Alabama, United States


2 posted 01-17-2011 06:52 AM       View Profile for ~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~   Email ~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~

i like this alot GREAT JOB

~XxExpect Nothing N You'll Never Get HurtxX~

Starcitta
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since 01-21-2011
Posts 18
WY, USA


3 posted 01-21-2011 06:26 PM       View Profile for Starcitta   Email Starcitta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starcitta

very beautiful, it speaks to me...it seems like a bad break-up maybe, or just the loss of someone special. Unfortunately alot of us know loss all too well, besides some typos and grammar, the voice in ur poetry lets you get away with it. Good job, i'd like to read more of your work.

Amor Y Lagrimas

khadidja
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since 12-03-2010
Posts 16


4 posted 01-26-2011 01:57 PM       View Profile for khadidja   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for khadidja

thank u guys

I'll b more than happy to share this feelings with u

thank u very very much for ur comments

I promis u that u'll see more and more from me


thx
maddorani
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since 11-18-2007
Posts 419
houston,tx


5 posted 03-11-2011 06:01 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

i love it i can somehow relate to you
FloraScars
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since 11-08-2010
Posts 33
VA, USA :D


6 posted 03-15-2011 04:24 PM       View Profile for FloraScars   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for FloraScars

very creative poem, keep writing!
 
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