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Be my Sunshine...

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Prats
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0 posted 12-18-2010 08:34 AM       View Profile for Prats   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Prats


Deep in my heart I'm concealing things,
that I'm longing to say;
Scared to confess what I'm feeling,
frightened you'll slip away.

I always wonder what youíre thinking,
When I look at you,
But Iím afraid to say anything,
Donít u feel this too?

When Iím with or around you,
I just lose myself,
Your heart is the only place where,
I want to dwell.

I know someday, uíll have a beautiful life,
Every thing ideally aligned.
I know, uíll be a sun in someone elseís sky,
Why canít it be mine???
Be my sunshine!!!

<3

Heaven is not that place where you go when you die... it's that time in your life when you actually feel ALIVE!!!

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XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
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1 posted 01-01-2011 09:07 AM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Moving. So sadly sweet.

∑ī~`∑≠ĽGarapanę≠∑ī~`∑

MadMarcus
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2 posted 01-01-2011 07:46 PM       View Profile for MadMarcus   Email MadMarcus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MadMarcus

I really liked this one!
Iīm feeling the same way atm.
Prats
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3 posted 01-02-2011 08:11 AM       View Profile for Prats   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Prats

I thank you for you comments...

When life gives you a hundred reasons to cry, show life that you have a thousand reasons to smile... :D

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