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All I Have To Give

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nehematala
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0 posted 12-17-2010 06:14 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for nehematala

Acceptence is one thing
I've never known
Love is a foriegn mystery

Too mature
Too grown up
People don't understand
I've got to keep moving
Not let the pain catch up

Eighteen years of pain
Eighteen years of hurt
Building up behind
The walls I've kept

My protection is crumbling
My hurt excaping
Running down my face
One little thing
Triggers it all

Need to get out
Need too run
But I'm trapped here
To deal with this
All on my own

Some try to help
But the hurt is too much
Others just walk by
Without a second glance
But I can't ask others
To bear my burden
It's my life to live

My only offering
Is that of suffering
Who would want
My broken love
It's all I have to give

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Prats
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1 posted 12-18-2010 08:48 AM       View Profile for Prats   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Prats

wow... really touching poem... ur way of expressing is wonderful...

Heaven is not that place where you go when you die... it's that time in your life when you actually feel ALIVE!!!

XGarapanX
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Very moving. Sorrowful and beautiful all at once.

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