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madelyn
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0 posted 12-10-2010 10:29 PM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for madelyn

Knowing itís wrong
But wanting it anyway
Itís been so long
Almost a day
Feels like a year
The needs make me
Filled with fear
Oh my god canít you see?
The inner war
To not give in
Through itís strong call
Itís a strong sin
This addiction
Removes all diction
The need pulling me
Like the strong tide
Being strong is key
The timeís mine to bide
Tired and sick
This addiction is like a tick
Sucking on my strength
But too what length?
Laying on my bed
Wishing I was dead
The need is stronger
Iím not gonna last much longerÖ


And now I lay me down to sleep, I pray the lord my soul to keep. And if I die before I wake, I pray the lord my soul to take.

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Prats
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1 posted 12-19-2010 12:53 AM       View Profile for Prats   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Prats

this poem's really touching...

Heaven is not that place where you go when you die... it's that time in your life when you actually feel ALIVE!!!

XGarapanX
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2 posted 01-01-2011 09:04 AM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

A very apt description of addiction!

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Sara Mikael
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3 posted 01-03-2011 09:13 AM       View Profile for Sara Mikael   Email Sara Mikael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sara Mikael

Yes,it's really touching
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