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pen&paper
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0 posted 12-04-2010 01:17 PM       View Profile for pen&paper   Email pen&paper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for pen&paper

IM friend list
Opens up
I see you there
And I know you see me
Too

This little stalemate
Weíve got going
Neither one wants
To make the first move

Sure, I guess Iím sorry
But are you sorry too?
Ignoring my texts
Say you donít want to talk to me
Didnít do anything that
Serious to you

And seeing you there
Makes me want to
Scream
Cry
Hug you Ďtil I die
And I donít know
What you want me to do

I think what Iím trying to say is
Iím tired
Of not speaking with you
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RevengeIsMine
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since 07-08-2006
Posts 832
Australia


1 posted 12-13-2010 08:22 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

And then there were those days when u would give anything to speak to somebody, but the courage disappears and you can't make the first move..

everyone can relate to this.. great poem.. the emotions just flow off the page..
XGarapanX
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2 posted 01-02-2011 05:44 AM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

This really busts me one in the chops. It's written so the reader easily slips into the writers seat and becomes the wounded party. So very well delivered.

∑ī~`∑≠ĽGarapanę≠∑ī~`∑

 
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