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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2010-12-04 12:42 PM


I never thought love was so hard
It seemed to creep up on me
The things you do to hurt me
Hurt worse than he ever hurt me

I am not a child, but you treat me so
Love me better, feed my soul
I don’t want love to die,
Or to let my soul feel empty

This love is wonderful, eternal
I know you love me,
Though I die every time I remember
I love you more

On the black coated walls, they wrote my doom.

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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
1 posted 2010-12-13 08:35 PM


Can i have my socks back plz?

This poem reminds me of this guy i used to date.. I knew he loved me.. I knew because he would never go near another girl.. he'd always come home to me every night without fail..  Problem was he couldn't admit it.. he couldn't say it out-loud and no matter how much i loved him, it would always be a love that couldn't last..  -- love ur work, always have, always will

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
2 posted 2010-12-17 11:43 PM


Awwww I love you!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for the comment. I miss Pip. I need to write more.

On the black coated walls, they wrote my doom.

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
3 posted 2011-01-02 05:41 AM


I.. I.. (sniffle) aaaargh...

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Sara Mikael
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since 2008-09-12
Posts 34

4 posted 2011-01-03 08:36 AM


Love what you've done.....
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