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Karleygirl
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since 2010-08-05
Posts 20


0 posted 2010-12-03 12:54 PM



As i lay here and wonder,
Thinking about you,
Thinking about all the dreams,
I wanted to come true,
I'm Hear my head's in the clouds,
Many say that, too.
I'm in the clouds,
I guess that dream came true,
I lay here all alone,
Thinking about you,
Thinking about what you said,
Now the words have sunken deep in my head,
Flash backs and sleepless nights,
Why can't i get over you?
To tell you the truth,
I really miss you, Boo.
It's hard for me to admitt it,
But i'm still inlove with you...
-Carley Perry


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khadidja
Junior Member
since 2010-12-03
Posts 16

1 posted 2010-12-03 12:56 PM


bravoo I truly like it

keep going!!

Chavo.wavo
Junior Member
since 2010-11-13
Posts 15

2 posted 2010-12-04 05:03 PM


Ive had the same feeling so many times. I liked this alot
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