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Stuck in the Clouds

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Karleygirl
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0 posted 12-03-2010 12:54 AM       View Profile for Karleygirl   Email Karleygirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Karleygirl


As i lay here and wonder,
Thinking about you,
Thinking about all the dreams,
I wanted to come true,
I'm Hear my head's in the clouds,
Many say that, too.
I'm in the clouds,
I guess that dream came true,
I lay here all alone,
Thinking about you,
Thinking about what you said,
Now the words have sunken deep in my head,
Flash backs and sleepless nights,
Why can't i get over you?
To tell you the truth,
I really miss you, Boo.
It's hard for me to admitt it,
But i'm still inlove with you...
-Carley Perry

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khadidja
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bravoo I truly like it

keep going!!
Chavo.wavo
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2 posted 12-04-2010 05:03 PM       View Profile for Chavo.wavo   Email Chavo.wavo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chavo.wavo

Ive had the same feeling so many times. I liked this alot
 
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