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Julien.D
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since 2010-11-28
Posts 4
France

0 posted 2010-11-28 08:17 PM


Has the world gone mad and the men gone blind ?
Binded in our souls and in all our moves
The sadness has spread on those of my kind
But hope still exists; your smiles are the proofs

Smile me again with your beautiful eyes
Let me taste your lips in a dark silence
I want to kiss you until the sunrise
Because the twilight needs your brilliance

I am hidden staring at you glass-eyed
In this glum sphere you are what I pursue
And in this void let me stay by your side
What is this world without the smell of you

Though the earth collapses and the sky falls
Crush me in your arms, do not let me go
Since suffering is less for the love’s crawls
I will stay with you until the deathblow


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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2011-01-05 09:17 PM


Great first post. Some really good lines in it-


I want to kiss you until the sunrise
Because the twilight needs your brilliance

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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