My love... if only you knew what it meant... My love burns in my heart with a fire so hot, only your love will quench it. My love explodes out of me like a bomb... and flows right into you. My love and your love will intertwine, and create not two hearts, but one. My love and your love will be a bond no one can break. My love will soon become... Our love...
This is romantic and full of wonderful sentiments, though I'm not sure it's the best you can do, after reading one or three of your others. I think you are capable of far better poetry than this, and I look forward to reading it as you produce it. Thanks!
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nice and deep, you must love this person alot, but this poem leaves me wondering if they love you as much as you do them? this line for some reason i really liked: "My love and your love will intertwine, and create not two hearts, but one."