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Chavo.wavo
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since 11-13-2010
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0 posted 11-26-2010 01:18 PM       View Profile for Chavo.wavo   Email Chavo.wavo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chavo.wavo


My love...
if only you knew what it meant...
My love burns in my heart with a fire so hot,
only your love will quench it.
My love explodes out of me like a bomb...
and flows right into you.
My love and your love will intertwine,
and create not two hearts, but one.
My love and your love will be a bond no one can break.
My love will soon become...
Our love...
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XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
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1 posted 01-05-2011 09:26 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

This is romantic and full of wonderful sentiments, though I'm not sure it's the best you can do, after reading one or three of your others. I think you are capable of far better poetry than this, and I look forward to reading it as you produce it. Thanks!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Starcitta
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2 posted 01-23-2011 11:07 PM       View Profile for Starcitta   Email Starcitta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starcitta

I like it, its intense, which is good. I'd like to read more

Amor Y Lagrimas

FloraScars
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since 11-08-2010
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3 posted 03-15-2011 04:27 PM       View Profile for FloraScars   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for FloraScars

nice and deep, you must love this person alot, but this poem leaves me wondering if they love you as much as you do them? this line for some reason i really liked:
     "My love and your love will intertwine,
      and create not two hearts, but one."
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