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Wake Up

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Vulpine
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since 05-20-2010
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Minnesota


0 posted 11-22-2010 10:28 PM       View Profile for Vulpine   Email Vulpine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Vulpine

Something cold, something mean
In my brain fast asleep
Wake me up donít let me drown
In my nightmare I canít be found

In my nightmare
In my dream
Wake me up
Before I scream

Before I scream
Wake me up
And get me out of this
Terrible rut

I canít wake up
And now I know
Itís not a dream
Itís just a show

A terrible show
Yes indeed
Of my life
I canít concede

A terrible fate
And now I know
A horrible life
Now I have to go

Iíll see you soon in twenty years
Or so and Iíll wait
At heavens gate
So you can live some more

I am simply me and not what you want me to be.

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Julien.D
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since 11-28-2010
Posts 4
France


1 posted 11-29-2010 05:54 PM       View Profile for Julien.D   Email Julien.D   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julien.D

What can I say except this word : beautiful
XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
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2 posted 01-05-2011 09:15 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

A moving presentation. Excellent.

∑ī~`∑≠ĽGarapanę≠∑ī~`∑  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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